A Commentary on Enhancing Spelling Proficiency among First-grade Elementary School Students: Music Art Education

As the thesis examiner, [I] am evaluating the research titled "Pengaruh Penggunaan Seni Musik dalam Meningkatkan Kemampuan Mengeja Kata pada Siswa Kelas 1: Sebuah Penelitian Eksperimen Pre-Test dan Post-Test" from an educational perspective and in terms of its logical flow in research and scientific writing. This guide aims to revise the proposal to enhance the coherence of previously tested proposals. This suggestion will be utilized for future studies. Therefore. This revision guide was written in Bahasa since the study proposal targets the Indonesian area and the university where students studied in Indonesia.<br>